When the journey started I wasn’t sober,
but I still reminisce everything over & over.
[¹] I met ten step-brothers,
Each wore a bony hat crafted by their mothers.
[²] I climbed a tiny hill,
Looking around to find my Jill.
[³] The smooth bridge that followed wasn’t stable,
But my Jill awaited me so it had to be worth the trouble.
[⁴] As I continued the ground turned wet,
“Softer & warmer is my Jill, I bet.”
[⁵] Next was a desert with a single well,
With my every move it vibrated like a bell.
[⁶] Now, I could see the two domes of a temple.
My destination was close & I witnessed the hurdles crumple.
[⁷] The final slender wall was high,
Stopping wasn’t an option cause I had no time to cry.
[⁸] When my lips met hers, she knew I’m back.
Never going to leave her, cause I’m her Jack.
The first stanza-
Refers to the ten toes of the lover.
The second stanza-
Refers to the medial malleolus.(Ankle for non-biology speakers, like me.👻)
The third stanza-
Refers to the lower part of Jill’s legs.
The fourth stanza-
Refers to the thighs.(Enough said.)
The fifth stanza-
Refers to Jill’s abdomen and the belly.
The sixth stanza-
Refers to the breasts.
The seventh stanza-
Refers to the slender neck.
The eighth stanza-
Refers to her lips.
©The Honest Fabler
©Cover credits- Google Images
Beautifully described !!!
Intelligently and brilliantly mixed with wit…interesting piece of writing it is..
Is it? I’m pleased! Thank you very much :’)✌
Yes…it is…but dont b pleased…bcs this can stop you to progress forward
I surely won’t stop! Thank you for your humble words and the concern ^-^ greatly appreciated.
good symbolism, very creative.
That is fabulous.
Thank you so much ,Daria. Your feedback is always awaited! ^-^
Really? Thank you.
You’re always welcome ^-^
Wow! Wow! Wow!
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Hey I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award https://desientertainmentblog.wordpress.com/2017/02/04/versatile-blogger-award/
Thanks a lot for this! I’m going to post it asap! ^-^
Oh yess. 😛
Thanks a lot rhyme bud!!❤️❤️