बारिश
बारिश के बूंदो ने जो हमे भिगो दिया,
ऐसा लगा मानो हमने आपको फिर छू लिया।
सौंधी खुशबू आई इस धरती की,
पर ऐसा लगा मानो हमने आपको फिर पा लिया।
Translation:
When the drops of rain drenched me,
It felt like the lost touch of your fingers.
The petrichor came from the earth,
But it felt like I found my lost treasure- that’s you.
It’s my first try at a language other than English. Hindi, here. I’d really appreciate your feedback and ways for me to improve! Thank you. ^-^
©Image source- Ashutosh Gursale
A good attempt mate! This was indeed a fresh piece of writing
Thanks a lot, mate! Really appreciate your feedbacks!
Well written!
Thank you, Ri!